- Good, interesting story overall, feels meaningful
- Story was very good
- Overall story is good
- Game appears really interesting & quite immersive
- Good range of choices
- Lots of options
- Options are good & there are many of them
- Sounds deep
Negatives
- "False" at beginning of sentences?
- Spelling mistakes e.g. "cklimbing"
- Even though you bring your walking staff, you still see "Why didn't you bring your walking staff"
- Few spelling mistakes & issue with the walking staff
- Check spellings, lots of mistakes
- Story needs finalising
- Don't understand the random "false"
- Must be buggy as I took coat but it said I hadn't
- Could have a timer for some quick choices to add urgency
- Spelling mistakes
- Random "false" on some sentences
- Errors when you get ready to hit the creature
- No continuation after you ask for directions to the village
- Few spelling mistakes & "false" at the beginning of some pages
- The word "false" sometimes appears randomly at beginning of passages
- Typos in general
- Some parts were broken
- Not a clear ending, "oh yes, I'm just perfect"?
- More images & clear endings would be nice
- More definitive endings & images
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